Malam Ini Malam Isnin.....

Salam... ukhuwwah fillah...

MALAM INI MALAM ISNIN....

Actually dah masuk pagi Selasa dah nie.... lalalala....

Aku sangat bosan ini malam... just want to do some comments here..not being emot... nak post sajak baru... blum trase jiwang jiwarasa nak berkarya.... erm... nak makan… dah makan tadi kat kandang… makan nasi ayam kunyit + air limau suam dengan abang fadlli…. nak online…. ni lah yg tengah aku buat… akhirnya aku mendapat satu idea best bakebaaaboom…!! Yihaaaa…. Ariba… ariba…

** Tajuk : Mari kita berbahasa sebaiknya….

~ macam tajuk sajak dalam buku komponen satera (KOMSAS) mase skolah dolu-dolu….sape ingat lagi, angkat tangan….!! Huhu… Lalala…. =)

Berikut ialah teks naskhah yang menarik sebagai contoh…

**teks pembetulan diwarnakan merah

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just want to do some comments here…

• it is preferred to say – I just want to comment here…
  Satu jer komen kan…! huhu..... =)

not being emotional or what...

• supposedly said as ‘not to be emotional’ (‘or what’ is eliminated)
  “Itu sudaaaa…” (bak kata Denias…..haha…!)

don judge people becoz of their appreances

• don – don’t; appreances - appearances
  

and teir attitudes coz that the way who they are...

• teir – their; full correction >> because of who they are

and about your LOLILOP

• LOLILOP satuuu….! Haha…It’s Lolipop darling… laju sangat taip nih… yeah.. love your enthusiasm….! =)
  

u nshould accepted comment from someone u didn't like....LIKE ME!!!!!

• You should accept comments from someone you don’t like…. like me…!!
• letter ‘n’ is eliminated
• didn’t = past tense; replaced with don’t)

if u don feel satisfied come and talk to me

• if you are not satisfied (‘don feel’ replaced with ‘are not’)

no need to be emotional HERE!!!!

• there’s no need to be emotional here!! (missing word – there’s)

so who is the one emtional here???

• so who is the one being emotional here? (missing word – being, missing letter ‘o’)

what bygone shud be bygone...

• supposedly said as ‘let bygones be bygones’

itjust a part of our life,hates,lives,and not everyone can accepted the way u think

• it is parts of our lives – hatred, living life
• and not everyone can accept the way you think ('-ed' is eliminated)
• -ed is only used for past tense or past participle
• **mind the use of spacing bar

people are the same....

• rasenye apa yang ingin dikatakan ialah‘people are not the same’

from diffrent background ok....

• ‘we come from different backgrounds’

u shud mind it in ur brain!!!

• you should keep that in your head!! (brain…??)

and beside that if u said LOLIPOP was the idea of ur friend...so do i care???
it's a part of u rite???

• " and besides, you said that Lolipop *is (‘was’ - used for stating things in the past) the idea of your friend. But still, you are a part of it too, right?

so we don called la WORKKSHOP!!!!

• jika diMelayukan … >> tidaklah kita memanggilnya Bengkel

NAMA PUN NAK REAPIRKAN APA YANG PATUT!!!

• reapir – repair, jika diMelayukan **namanya pun membetulkan apa yang sepatutnya

APA YANG JELIK!!!

• tiada masalah

APA YANG ROSAK

• tiada masalah

AND TAK ELOK!!!!

• ‘dan’ tak elok

stop being that u are so innocent....

• stop pretending being so innocent **huhu… innocent….? =)

huhuhu...

• tiada masalah

if other people don tell me abt this blog i don feel anything
but other people told me abt ur blog....

• ** if nobody tells me about this blog, I won’t feel nothing…
• but somebody did tell me about your blog… (don – don’t; abt – about)

abt ur comments....

• about your comments

huhuhuhu...

• tiada masalah

LIFE IS NOT EASY.....

• tiada masalah

AND ONE MORE THING

• tiada masalah

DID U KNOW EVERYTHING ABT ME????

• did – do

soryy for being rude here

• soryy - sorry

as u said i'm emotional rite

• tiada masalah…. Ehh..! **rite - right

s i will show how emotional am i!!!!

• so I will show you how emotional I am!

SORRY AGAIN.....

• tiada masalah

Notasi :

1) I’m sorry I’m a nature-borned editor…. automatic corrector… whatever…

2) I don’t like making a fuss over silly things… unless somebody made me ‘touched’ about it…

3) I love all my friends, no matter how good or bad they are…

4) Please mark my word….. I have no problem with anyone… now... that it was over. And in fact, this comment came in quite a month later after that post being posted …

5) I’m sorry too… saying those things... didn’t really mean to say it… but I’m distracted and needed a place to say it all out…

6) It’s my blog anyway, and I get to say whatever I want to say emotionally, educationally, artistically or intellectually…

Owh…! Nota tambahan…

** APOLOGY ACCEPTED…!! peace.........! =)

Salam Ukhuwwah fillah…. =)